What is she waiting for?

My first traditional inking attempt, and I officially announce that inking the traditional way is seriously hard I am quite a heavy handed person so I ended up penetrating the paper to death (Deleter A4, scale A 135 gr). Ink bleeding seems to be a big problem. Got the posing (torso only) from a picture.
Don't mind the background, it was just to fill the paper and I wasn't patient to ink them properly anyways. Ink: Deleter Black 3 (glossy, waterproof, eraser proof, smudge with colored copic markers).

I tried tree different types of pen nibs before starting this drawing. I have to say the G nib (Tachikawa) is the most comfortable for me. Maru, which is for thin lines and details, became a killing machine in my heavy hand. On the other hand, spoon pen nib was quite OK. However it didn't glide on the paper smoothly as I thought it would. So "G" is OK for me.
My scanner is not scanning black and white but only greyscale and colored. So I had to contrast it in computer a little which made the lines thicker sort of.

Anyways, if you accidentally see the picture xD and if you are experienced in inking, please guide me for better results